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:bulletred: Deviation description
A full-body shot of Mark Jerry, the main protagonist!

:bulletorange: Author's comment
I drew this one quite a long while ago, I was practising proportion and use some references of myself to get the length of the limbs right, well as proper shoulder alignment. I do have a brush-shaded version of this but it honestly didn't look too good, the flat-colours should suffice! Instead of going for the overdone stranding-straight pose looking forward, I tried to add a bit more to it, coming up with this rather cheerful, energetic pose that really works for the character.

This picture supercedes two previous incarnation I drew awhile back named Mark Masayume and Mark Jerry - 2008, although the latter is the only picture showing his crystal, the source of his powers. Regardless, I this deviation one of my best pictures of a person I've done so far, as well as the most aesthetically pleasing interpretation of Mark.

:bulletgreen: Critique Preference
Constructive critique is welcome, but once again NO ONE-LINER COMMENTS, even if it's praise, it means nothing to me to say it's 'cool' or 'nice'. Follow the OAR(S) proceedure in making the perfect comment.

Opinion: I like/hate/found this interesting...
Aspect: ...because of the colour/design/clothing...
Reason: ...it matches well with whatever/it's quite detailed/the zips are well placed...
(and in the case of doing a critique)
Suggestion: You can fix this problem by trying this, or this.

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:iconsirrinose:
I like the picture, the pose more than anything because it looks like Mark's Dancing but i think that the folds on the clothes could use a little practice they look randomly placed on their more than flowing naturally.

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:iconmtp623:
I like the pose and you did, its like he's trying to present himself =3. You also very good job drawing this too ^-^.
:icontopheavy:
That name is dumb

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